(about 512 pages)
128,058
total words
of all the books in our library
|
74.34%
vividness
of all the books in our library
|
8.31%
passive voice
of all the books in our library
|
3.05%
all adverbs
of all the books in our library
|
1.08%
ly-adverbs
of all the books in our library
|
1.97%
non-ly-adverbs
of all the books in our library
|
We’ve analyzed hundreds of millions of words, from thousands of different authors, training our linguistic models to recognize the most vivid words in the English language… the words that create the most intense sensory experiences: colors, textures, sounds, flavors, and aromas.
Based on our analysis, we’ve scanned through the pages of this book to find the two pages at the extremes, both the most-passive and the most-vivid pages, so that you can compare them side-by-side and see the difference:
MOST PASSIVE PAGE |
MOST VIVID PAGE |
the two had kept few secrets as they drifted through their labors. Conversation was more important than progress. Phil was clergy. Nate was a lawyer. Everything said was covered by some manner of confidential privilege. “It’s a nice starting place,” Nate said. “But they’ll take a lot less.” “You expect it to be settled?” “Sure. We’ll meet on Wednesday with the Judge. He’ll apply more pressure. By then the lawyers and their clients will be counting the money.” “So when do you leave?” “Friday, I guess. You wanna come?” “I can’t afford it.” “Sure you can. My client will foot the bill. You can be my spiritual adviser for the trip. Money is no object.” “It wouldn’t be right.” “Come on, Phil. I’ll show you the Pantanal. You can meet my pals Jevy and Welly. We’ll go for a boat ride.” “You haven’t made it sound very appealing.” “It’s not dangerous. There’s quite a tourist business in the Pantanal. It’s a great ecological preserve. Seriously, Phil, if you’re interested I can make it happen.” “I don’t have a passport,” he said, and sipped his coffee. “Plus I have so much work to do here.” Nate would be gone for a week, and he somehow liked the fact that the basement would look the same when he returned. “Mrs. Sinclair is expected to die any day now,” Phil said quietly. “I can’t be gone.” The church had been waiting for Mrs. Sinclair to die for at least a month. Phil was | left arm held the IV, so he began picking at the tape with the fingers of his right hand. He was aware of voices in another room, and steps on a hard floor. People were busy down the hall. Closer, someone was moaning in a low, steady, painful voice. He slowly worked the tape from his skin and hair, and cursed the person who’d stuck it there. He laid the bandage to one side; it hung over his left ear. His first image was peeling paint, a dull shade of faded yellow on the wall just above him. The lights were off, rays of sun drifted in from a window. The paint on the ceiling was cracked too, large black gaps shrouded with cobwebs and dust. A rickety fan dropped from the center and wobbled as it spun. Two feet caught his attention, two old, gnarled, scarred feet layered with wounds and calluses from toes to soles, sticking in the air, and when he lifted his head slightly he saw that they belonged to a shriveled little man whose bed almost touched his. He appeared dead. The moaning came from the wall near the window. This poor guy was just as small and just as shriveled. He sat in the middle of his bed, arms and legs folded and tucked into a ball, and suffered his affliction in a trance. The smell was of old urine, human waste, and heavy antiseptic all mixed into one thick odor. Nurses laughed down |
This chart visualizes the the shifting emotional balance for the arc of this story, based on the emotional strength of the words in the prose, using techniques pioneered by the UVM Computational Story Lab. | To create this story arc, we divided the complete manuscript text into 50 equal-sized chunks, each with 2561.16 words, and then we scored each section by counting the number of strongly-emotional words, both positive and negative. | The bars in the chart move downward whenever there’s conflict and sadness, and they move upward when conflicts are resolved, or when the characters are happy and content. The size of each bar represents the positive or negative word-count of that section. |